Some great writing tips

• music always helps ( but make sure its good music)
• Juice helps keep you focused AND full
• chocolate is a very good partner
• a comfy seat
• not too bright lights

    Stuff about the ACTUAL writing

• try not to start all of you sentences the same
• don't use the words and, said, I , was, Too often
• Different sentence length
• don 't rush your story

Major Components of Stories

• Plot is the organization of events that will take place in the story.
• Characters are the people or animals who will be in the story.
• Setting is the physical time and place in which the story takes place.
• Dialogue is the spoken words of the characters in the story.
• Point of view is the relative identification of the narrator with the characters.
• Theme is the main idea or meaning behind a story.
• Style is the writer's use of the language.

WORDS OTHER THAN SAID THAT YOU CAN USE

accused	clucked	gulped	pointed out	smirked
acknowledged	coaxed	gurgled	pondered	snapped
added	commanded		praised	snarled
addressed	commented	hinted	prayed	sneered
admitted	complained	hissed	proclaimed	sneezed
advised	conceded	hollered	promised	snickered
affirmed	concluded	hypothesized	proposed	sniffed
agreed	confessed		protested	sniffled
announced	confided	imitated	put in	snorted
answered	congratulated	implied	puzzled	sobbed
approved	continued	informed		speculated
argued	convinced	inquired	quavered	spoke
asked	corrected	insisted	queried	sputtered
asserted	coughed	interjected	questioned	squeaked
assured	cried	interrupted	quipped	stammered
avowed	croaked		quoted	started
	crowed	jeered		stated
babbled		jested	ranted	stormed
barked	dared	joked	reasoned	stuttered
bawled	decided		reassured	suggested
beamed	declared	laughed	recalled	surmised
began	demanded	lied	reckoned	taunted
begged	denied	lisped	related	teased
bellowed	described		remarked	tempted
bet	disagreed	maintained	remembered	tested
bleated	disclosed	marveled	reminded	theorized
blurted	divulged	mentioned	repeated	threatened
boasted	doubted	mimicked	replied	told
boomed	drawled	moaned	reported	trilled
bragged		mumbled	requested	urged
broke in	echoed	murmured	responded	uttered
bubbled	ended	mused	retorted	volunteered
bugged	exclaimed	muttered	revealed	vowed
burst out	explained		roared
called	finished	nagged		wailed
cautioned	fretted	nodded	sang	warned
chatted		noted	sassed	went on
chattered	gasped	objected	screamed	wept
cheered	gibed	observed	scoffed	whimpered
chided	giggled	offered	scolded	whined
chimed in	greeted	ordered	shot	whispered
choked	groaned		shouted	wondered
chortled	growled	panted	shrieked	worried
chorused	grunted	piped	shrilled
chuckled	grumbled	pleaded	sighed	yawned
claimed	guessed	pled	smiled	yakked

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HANAH

MORE WORDS   12.56% YAY YAY YAY YAY LOTS OF WORDS

strange huh???
what about these









AND MOST SHOCKING OF ALL

 now that is what I call sad they tied him up  because he is a swine and they are afraid he will give them swine flu




Right now my mother is playing video games my brother id helping and i am posting
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WORDS

Look how much of my nano wrimo i have done now  9.06% YAY THATS A LOT OF WORDS!!!

Nano Wrimo

 2.28% thats how much of my nano wrimo is done

YAY

I have nothing to write about really nothing at all. I wil tell you about my halloween some other time
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MWA HA HA HA HA HA DEATH BY TRAY


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NANO WRIMO

Yay nano wrimo has started YA YA YA YA YA YA YA YA YA YA YA YA YA YA YA YA YA

Pumpkins!!!

SO I carved my pimpkin today and it sort of looks like it is on something it was a lot of fun and on the other side i carved out the word TWILIGHT but screwed up big time on the H. It was a lot of fun and a REALLY BIG mess to clean up but SOO mucjh fun YAY according to mother I am no longer sick that is GREAT!!!!!!!!! I am going trick or treating with cassandra tomorrow I am going to be a die ya know like dice 


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Still sick

Sick well I have a few more cons to add to being sick like
For one If I am not well by tomorrow I can't gosee the half blood prince since I am sick today I can't go to the halloween party for band tomorrow. And themn If I am sick on saturday I can't go trick or treating with cassanadra


So this reallly sucks a lollipop


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This was my 10th post  oh and we arte already on post number letsee 1234567891011121314151617181910........ so on and so fourth till we land at 90 thats
okay well the answer to the riddle of the day last time was a stamp DUH!
i love to write randoms
have you heard about the peekaru It is a snuggie that connects a mom to its baby It looks like she has two heads SERIOUSLY

I like twilight If you look closely some random girl shows up about 12 times, not to mentions when bella says "things were getting alittle weird" a guy in a black hoodie run behind her. HA
by the way i am going to get glasses It rocks they look soo cool


and incase you hadn't noticed there are a ot of other weird things like that that happened
Like when they are in the hospital after the whole mirror room thing the tv in the backround is playing the fire scene you know where alixce and them build a fire in the studio to burn james yeah thats playing 


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HOT cocoa

I just wanted to say I LOVVVVEEEEEEEEEEE HOT CHOCOLATE

SO yeah I had this big post in mind then my computer screwed up and now I can't remember it. so I'm just gonna wait til I remember........  well since I can't remeber I will write about how peoplpe in turkey have to wait until december  to see new moon. oh man do I feel really bad for those guys and I think the uk has to wait until nov.27. and you won't believe this people in GERMANY HAVE TO WAIT UNTIL .....HERE IT COMES.... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! JANUARY 7 2010. OH yes I said it I know those release dates and ome do I feel bad for those guys (or should I say girls)

YAY FOR TWILIGHT! :) (and new moon and eclipse and breaking dawn) Check this out amanaplanacanalpanama


Foopets are fun pets. great for people who are allergic or can't have dogs or cats
Plus they are a lot of fun there is a chat bar so you can talk to friends which is theONLY reason I MIGHT use it because I have a dog and it requires money like EVERYTHING nowadays does:~{(



























BLAAHHHHH






I bet I scared you just now
what is that you sayI did NOt scare you well you can just ... just... just... you know what just go away okay just go away




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H1N1

 Well you all know how people are totally freaking oput about the H1N1 well I was one of the few people in my class not making a really huge deal over it and guess what  I CAUGHT THE H1N1 FLU Is that Karma or what????



So this was me before the H1N1 ruined me














This is me now



Well here are the pros and cons of being sick

                PROS

1. you get the couch
2. no hard chores
3. don't have to deal w/ teachers
4. chicken noodle soup
5. extra computer time

              CONS

1. have to take medicine
2. might miss lots of assignments
3. more homework
4. don't get to talk to your friends
5. Due dates missed/ though might be excused
6. gym, grade goes down
7. none of ms. stachwick's UNBELIVEABLE stories (no seriously no one believes a word of it) 

So you tell me if you think it sounds better to stay home from school

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300

I just hit my 300th page view lets celebrate
HANAH

MY DOG

OME My dog got abath yesterday cause she smelled real bad. then when she was done we dried her off then she ran to the chair and tried to dry her face off with the blanket ity was halairious she was paying so much attention to getting dry that she actually flipped out of the chair and landed upside dowmn i LAUGHED MY BUTT OFF!!

OMg

holy cow sorry for not posting in like forever but I am mainly working on my piczo.SO I am back to posting all the time again but you do need to check out my piczo @ www.twitchclips.piczo.com  It is reaslly cool I have tons of things to do including to darkside like come to the dark side we have cookies. Well I havent been up to much
delaney and I are going to be in the school talent showAWESOMENESS we are doing the duck song !!!!!!1 she is the duck . I am the lemonade man I throw a cup at her at one point when I getmad enough. HA HA HA AH AHA AHA HA AH i am getting ready for my 100th post already we are at post # 81
Bye nozomi nakamura, HANAH ,hannah, twitch

Sorry I havent posted in a while I have been busy doing absolutly nothing but if you want to see a really cool go to www.twitchclips.piczo.com